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Let's journey to old and distant points of light.
the one's of most wise elements.
A voyage,  
to the edge of creation.

Let's dive the depths
of superb pressure.
A voyage,
to the dark parts of oblivion.

Let's wander the colossal expanse
of sensory nirvana.
A voyage,
to  limitless conception.

Let's trek through the cracks and crevices
of life's contemplation.
A voyage,
to caverns of ethereal salvation.

Let's pass through the ring
of time's fiery womb.
A voyage,
to our next incarnation.

Let's voyage
Without a destination.
Opening poem for Evoke's latest pack.
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One of my most favorite from you baby. I know people may think I am being impartial, but I wouldn't have worked so much to get it in the pack if I thought it wasn't as great as it is. I wish you would write more optimistic things like this. It shows me a bit of hope and I love seeing it. I have to write 100 words, so I will keep mumbling on and on til I get to the 100 mark minimum ... first critique. I will share this link at evoke as well. love you!

Very well done.
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LuckyGaliger72 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
love Love LOVE this!!! Fantastic job.
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pgizzle618 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010
super good work!
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:iconlabseven:
Labseven Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010
:) Thanks so much.. I'm glad you liked it .
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viremaster Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
=) awesome
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:iconlabseven:
Labseven Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010
I really appreciate it.
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Smiling-Demon Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Great poem.
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:iconlabseven:
Labseven Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010
Thank you :)
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strivera Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
absolutely love this! well written. :highfive:
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:iconlabseven:
Labseven Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2010
Thanks :) Glad you liked it..
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